Friday, October 9, 2009

EDRG 3344 T/R Revised Narrative

My narrative is a short fiction story, which I am planning as my final outcome to have made into a book format with binding and with pictures.

Do not have a title yet to my book

Here is my revised narrative story.

“The time has come…Germ Buster’s we must visit the schools again and make sure all our students know how to take care of themselves,” Sanitize Sam said enthusiastically.

“He’s right,” said Healthy Heather. “They are saying this season is suppose to be our worse one yet, and it’s our job to make sure our children are ready this flu season. This Swine Flu can be scary!”

“She is right, okay we need to hurry, let’s go!” Clean Clifford said urgently.

Clean Clifford and his Germ Buster team knew it was important to let all the children know how important proper hand washing is.

A group of students were sitting in their class writing in their journals when all of a sudden the class grew windy and suddenly the Germ Buster team appeared.

“Hello students, it us your friendly Germ Buster team” said Clean Clifford.

The students were so happy to see their favorite germ fighting agents.

“Now boys and girls we are here because we want you all to be prepared for this flu season” said Sanitize Sam with a concern look on his face.

Next, Healthy Heather asked the students a question, “Boys, and girls we all know what germs can do to us…can someone tell us why germs are so harmful?” asked Healthy Heather.

One child quickly raised his hand and with confidence answered “ I can tell you germs are bad because they can make us very sick!”

All the children nodded their head and agreed.

Mrs. Apple who was the teacher asked her favorite Germ Buster team to explain to the students again how they can properly wash their hands.

The Germ Buster team began by showing the students pictures of what bad germs look like.

“Yuck, that’s gross!” one student said.

“This is what stays on your hands boys and girls if you don’t wash your hands properly” said Clean Clifford.

“We can beat these germ villains!” Healthy Heather said proudly.

“Yeah!” the class shouted with enthusiasm.

“Okay students let’s go over step by step the correct way to wash our hands,” said Sanitize Sam.

Sanitize Sam and the other Germ Buster agents showed the students how to wash their hands.

Suddenly appeared a magical sink and soap. Clean Clifford told the students “Okay first step rinse your hands off with water, then apply soap, and start to lather”.

“He’s right boy’s and girl’s, now wash your hands and sing two Happy Birthday songs out loud,” said Healthy Heather. “Let’s all sing together”.

The Germ Buster team and students all sang two Happy Birthday songs.

“Great job everyone, now once you are done grab a paper towel, and dry your hands, also use that paper towel to turn off the knob off, and then you can throw it away” Sanitize Sam told the class.

“Congratulations class we all know how to safely and carefully wash our hands” said the Germ Buster team with excitement.

What other important safety habits do you follow?

1 comment:

  1. I like the story , it is good for children to know good hygine. I am a germaphobic myself so I could use this narrative to read to students and reinforce my beliefs on how imporant it is to wash our hands. It is scary how fast the flu can spread among our students. Good job!

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